The exterior of Ong Teng Cheong Student Activities and Leadership Training Centre (Salt Centre) looked impressive - it seemed like an impenetrable castle with white walls and huge pillars wearing a red triangular cap. Trees decorated by the side and front of Salt Centre danced liked they knew the beat of the wind. It seemed empty from the outside, a lonely place other than the breeze. However, the scenario inside Salt Centre contrasted significantly.
The interior of Salt Centre was bustling with activities. Students moved like ants crawling around a nest inside the Salt Centre. A high contrast as it was a huge building. One of the activities, which was the most noticeable, was the NPCC Secondary 1 Orientation 2011. There, in a small corner of the Salt Centre, gathered about 50 students - both cadets and cadets-to-be. The students were gathered around 3 poles tied together, chanting cheers. After which, the seniors went on to explain the various components of CampCraft.
The Sun shone against the Salt Centre, intensifying its brilliant white coat of paint it was wearing. The wind blew, and the trees swayed again. This time, the scene looked like a concert, while the students were actors of this wonderful play - CCA.
Wow! What a good blog post.The way you describes the salt center is really magnificent. There were appropriate use of simile. My favorite was when you described the students moving like ants crawling around a nest. I find this description very good as we are busy students who are actively participating in activities in the salt center. There was a wide variety of vocabulary and I could not find any grammar mistakes. Again, I have o say that you have great descriptive skills, something that I admire a lot. Well done Zane.
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