Popeye stood impatiently against a railing, his gaze fixed on the ocean, trying to catch a glimpse of any ship. Every second or two, he would punch the railing, venting his anger on them. Soon, A ship sailed into the harbor and Olive Oyl was tied to the mast of the ship. She was gagged and signaled for Popeye to save her.
Popeye glared at the hundreds of man onboard and jumped onto the ship. He was outnumbered a hundred is to one but, Popeye had a secret weapon – Spinach. He burst opened the can of spinach and swallowed it in one gulp. His biceps started to move around and expand. Before long, it was twice as big as the can of spinach. Popeye rushed forward to combat the pirates. Cutlasses were dented; swords and daggers broken; rifles with their parts dismantled – all done by Popeye himself. With a powerful swing, he sent tens of people sprawling all over the deck with some overboard.
Popeye stole a dagger from a pirate easily and threw it at ropes that were binding Olive with shocking accuracy. The ropes were sliced cleanly and fell to the ground. Bluton, unknown to Popeye, already had a rifle aimed at Popeye’s head…
I like your story a lot, since I have watched this cartoon when I was a child, and so I believe you have too. Sadly, it stopped showing in Cartoon Network a few years ago ): Your story contains specific characteristics and descriptions that match the actual cartoon, and you have added some extra information. Also, you displayed Popeye's strength extremely well, describing the impacts of Popeye's attacks.
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ReplyDeleteHi Zane,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your story very much. You described Popeye's feelings through his actions like "Every second or two, he would punch the railing".You also showed Popeye's strength by the effects of his attacks on the pirates. You also gave a vivid description of Popeye's appearance like "His biceps started to move around and expand. Before long, it was twice as big as the can of spinach.".Overall, I enjoyed your story very much. Good job!
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